School essay: Glock Gen4 Review

[Irving]

Is it okay that you wrote this in first person? Should be able to write a review without that.

[villageidiot]

Is it okay that you wrote this in first person? Should be able to write a review without that.

Avoiding the first first person was something my high school teachers and college professors generally suggested. However, at least in the scientific literature there is a move towards it, look at the author guidelines for high end journals like Nature and Science.

For a review of a product first person seems pretty reasonable, its the authors opinions in the end.